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05/04/2007 11:37:22 PM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: Pretty crisp, but opening up that aperture a bit might have helped sharpen it up more. I do like the idea and I like what you came up with.
Lighting: It also looks like the lighting was too harsh, thus washing things out a bit. Opening up that aperture and toning down the lighting would have made a nice difference. The brightness of the lips and the shadows inside the mouth are a bit distracting.
Composition/Content: Great idea. You did a very nice job meeting the challenge in a very creative manner. Perhaps replacing the pink straw with a bright blue one would have added some nice color contrast, as well as give the eye more of an opportunity to flow around the image.
My Opinion: Nice work, and a fine score that followed. With some slight adjustments in your lighting and just a little more color, you would have been well into the 6 range.
Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric |
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05/01/2007 07:48:30 PM |
| great concept and executed well.. however the skin is not right to me.. the color is off.. i know its not the WB because the milk is nice and white, so maybe oversaturation? still a great shot. 6 |
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05/01/2007 02:38:49 PM |
| A fun and sexy image. A great setup and composition. My biggest criticism is that the lighting seems a little flat. I think the milkshake needs a little more contrast and the models chest a little darker. That would help the image pop out more I think. |
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04/30/2007 11:13:37 PM |
| good idea, but the model's skin color seems a little "off" |
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04/30/2007 11:08:21 PM |
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04/30/2007 06:55:40 PM |
| Sexy and innocent all in one. Red lips and milk. Nice try. |
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04/30/2007 01:55:13 PM |
| Maybe a little too much flash on the lips...really like the photo and the idea...nice work...7 |
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04/30/2007 12:24:49 PM |
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04/29/2007 04:22:59 PM |
| Pretty good shot, The models lip stick as bright as it is draws the eye away from the bubbles though. Not bad |
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04/29/2007 03:31:02 AM |
| Nicely done, I like the framing. |
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04/29/2007 12:29:17 AM |
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04/26/2007 05:47:32 PM |
| The bubbles are great - nice dof and "texture" to them. They contrast well with the background. The model's skin is too smooth...there's no distinction from when her head/chin ends and her neck begins - it's all the same tone. Her skinn is too orange me too. |
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04/26/2007 05:33:40 PM |
| Very nice composition, colors and lighting. |
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04/25/2007 09:13:32 PM |
Teach me to do my lips!
Please!
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04/25/2007 07:29:05 PM |
| Nice colors and contrasts. |
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04/25/2007 05:00:34 PM |
| I love the shot!!! Good photo and a great idea |
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04/25/2007 11:38:38 AM |
| hmm that straw is a bit peculiar.. i like the shot though. the angle and composition are nice. good job. |
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04/25/2007 03:28:26 AM |
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04/25/2007 02:42:42 AM |
| Great bubbles! I would have lit the face with slightly more contrast to differentiate where the neck separates from the chin |
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