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05/08/2007 09:13:26 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Compositionally, you have some interesting elements in this. The woman walking, the car and the clothesline all give the eye something to follow throughout the picture. In that sense, it is a well-composed shot. It feels like it is "leaning" slightly to the right though. I'm also wondering how a horizontal crop of this same scene would look? That would help give the viewer more of a context of the street, but I also think that it would help to lessen the distraction that the dark thing in the upper left corner is providing.
Technically, the bright colors really liven this up. There are a lot of yellow/gold/orange tones and I think a touch of contrast might help make those a bit more bold and ready to *pop.* OR a touch of overall contrast may help as well to help emphasize the boldness of the shot.
Overall, a very interesting shot.
If I need to further clarify or explain myself, please feel free to contact me.
karma |
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05/05/2007 03:28:34 AM |
| What a colorful place! Nicely composed - nice light, too. |
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