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05/04/2007 01:22:03 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Initial reaction - it made me laugh out loud! A very fun shot, both the bubbles upside the head and the cheesy grin!
I will tell you that I have absolutely no idea why it scored a mid-4 - none at all. The lighting is good and even, color is good, composition works well for what you're presenting. Focus may be a little soft, but not terribly so (and I prefer "soft" to "ubersharp" anyway.) Perhaps had you used a buxom blonde female with cleavage instead of a balding gentleman.... but to me, that would ruin the effect. And it definitely meets the challenge! I see from some of the other comments (which I just read - I wait 'til I've done my critique to read 'em) that some didn't like the light, some thought the subject "creepy" - and I still don't get why it scored in the 4s.
With that I'll say please keep shooting, and whatever you do, don't let DPC scores discourage you!
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05/01/2007 02:49:20 PM |
A fun ad well executed image. It seems to lack something, though I'm not sure what. It has a little bit of motion with the movement of the water but I think a bit of "action" would have helped to bring it alive and give it more personality. |
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05/01/2007 02:31:14 PM |
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04/30/2007 11:54:10 PM |
Strangely enough this is delightful: colours, composition, lighting and expression. |
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04/30/2007 07:58:51 AM |
I think if Joe's eyes and head-top were the only thing showing while the rest of him was under water this would be more effective. |
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04/27/2007 03:37:55 PM |
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04/27/2007 10:04:33 AM |
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04/27/2007 12:49:28 AM |
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04/26/2007 08:24:43 PM |
I'm speechless. Not in a good way. |
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04/25/2007 09:26:17 PM |
The suds on the tip of his nose is funny. It goes with his grin. Very funny! |
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04/25/2007 11:45:26 AM |
Joe, your silly. This image is not very original, you need to be more creative. |
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04/25/2007 11:25:43 AM |
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04/25/2007 11:06:51 AM |
ummm... no comment. it meets the challenge. |
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04/25/2007 03:28:07 AM |
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