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05/13/2007 11:19:16 AM |
[quote=sfalice] Greetings from the Critique Club
Thanks so much. I agree if I had moved the camera a bit to the left the distracting seed to the right in the picture would not be there either. Contrary to believes, small tortoises are not slow but move very fast especially if they think you have something good to eat:-))
My first thought was that the blur focused the baby more, after reading your comment I can see that some of it cropped out would look much better.
Your critique was very appreciated and thanks so much for taking the time. |
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05/13/2007 10:28:01 AM |
What a cutie patootie! I love tortoises. |
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05/13/2007 10:26:44 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
Wow, great shot of that desert tortoise. Super coloring and super focus on the legs and head of this creature.
It's hard to know what to critique in this image because I like it a lot, but I did play around with the composition a little. Smack in the center of the frame is not always the best composition, and if this guy would let you, an off-center shot would also be good. And if it was mine, I'd probably crop out a bit more of the foreground blur, but that's a matter of opinion and your crop works fine.
So, all in all a good image that met the Challenge nicely and one that gave you a fairly decent score.
Keep up the good work and I'll look forward to seeing more of your work. |
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05/05/2007 11:51:50 AM |
nicely captured--great DOF, colors and detail. |
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05/05/2007 05:00:14 AM |
The look on his face is great! -8- |
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05/04/2007 05:44:50 PM |
Aren't we all symmetrical? - good expression on the turtle, good DOF |
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05/04/2007 08:11:28 AM |
He's one mean looking turtle! I like the blurred out effect all around the turtle, but it's too bad that the outer portion of the turtle's shell got blurred out too. Like the colours in the background - they play off nicely with the colours present in the turtle. Nice entry |
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05/03/2007 02:07:32 PM |
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05/03/2007 12:35:15 PM |
I love the shallow dof - it makes his little head pop. i really like this. |
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