CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Compositionally, you have done well, I think, in all three pictures. The eagle's head fills the framely nicely, and "sits" in such a way as to give the viewer a "direction" to go once they've looked at the picture.
The series is also good as it seems to show a progression of the bird turning its head. Unfortunately, I think the smallness of the pictures is a bit of a detraction in that we can't see a lot of detail on the bird. Another possibility may have been to include different shots of the bird, instead of just the head, and arranged them in such a way that more detail could be shown. This may have also added to the "story" or interest of the shot as well.
Technically, the shots seem to have good exposure, focus, etc. There are enough shadows to give some depth to the shot, but they aren't harsh. The colors are subtle, but fitting.
Overall, I think it is a nice series of pictures, and really captures the intensity of the bird well.
If I need to further clarify or explain myself, please feel free to contact me.
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