CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
NO!! No more snow or cold weather, please!!! :)
Compositionally, I love the angle of this shot. It is interesting and and pleasing as well. It also seems a natural pose for a young girl. I also like that she is not "straight" in the frame, but tilted just a bit. Again, I think this adds to the youthfulness and playfulness of the shot.
Technically, the colors are very pleasing. The green balls were a bit distracting at first, because I couldn't tell where they "originated" or why they were there. Otherwise, the pink really sits nicely against the snow. The focus is good and sharp, and I think you have done well to exposure her face and "front" as well as you have without blowing out the snow. My only nitpick is that her face is too smooth. There is little or no detail left there at all. Since this is a portrait, that is the main focal point, and it seems unnatural. My apologies if her skin is naturally that smooth, but it seems like a result of noise reduction.
Awesome shot, and if I need to further clarify or explain myself, please let me know.
karma
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