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05/17/2007 12:55:13 AM |
Hello from the Critique Club
First Reaction was cute shot.
Technically
Well honestly, it is overexposed, sounds like you are having problems with the camera. Too much sun on her arms and face losing the skin color
I do like the texture of the ball.
Composition is good, like the way the ball fills the screen. Her expression is cute and she is having fun.
It maybe time to invest in a new camera if you can. You have a good eye for the shot but your camera, if it is not working the way you want is holding you back, that can become frustrating.
Thanks for allowing me to critique your photo.
Keep shooting and have fun.
Karen
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05/13/2007 10:36:24 PM |
| SORRY JUST NOT MUCH TO IT |
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05/10/2007 10:39:48 AM |
| Nice perspective with size, but not really action |
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05/09/2007 04:01:36 PM |
| That's what sport is all about. Kids having a good time. The light is a bit harsh which is pretty hard to avoid outside. I really like your POV/composition and your DOF. Great shot. |
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05/09/2007 07:20:40 AM |
| The giant basketball doesn't add anything to the photo yet it occupies a bit part of the frame. It would be better if the girl was looking at the camera, or was otherwise showing some kind of emotion. The bright reflection of the sun on her arms is a bit distracting. |
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