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02/05/2004 12:59:23 PM |
| Very dynamic, well focused shot from front to back. |
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12/29/2003 01:30:43 PM |
Critique Club review:
Howdy Amit,
IMO your shot meets the challenge quite well.
The shot is really interesting. There are many interpretations and thought you can derive from the shot. I tend to look at is as an adventure of travel. Plowing through the rain/fog to somewhere unseen. This mood is wonderful.
The shot itself is set-up perfectly. Rule of thirds, to me, is excellent. The bus being 1/3, the road 1/3 with the nice curve, and the cliff wall the last 1/3. My eye follows the road and curve (the subject) and bus and wall lead my eye to the road. I like this. especially with the fog and wetness.
The colors and shading are right on. The light spot in the sky with the tree are nice modifiers. The more I look the better I like your shot.
IMO I see no negatives in this shot. Too bad you didn't get a ribbon, but you will if you keep it up. Great shot and look forward to seeing future shots.
Have a Great 2004.
Van
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12/23/2003 09:54:25 AM |
| The fog and the scene to my left are wonderful, the bus and the dew are only OK. |
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12/20/2003 12:06:21 PM |
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12/19/2003 03:33:28 AM |
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12/18/2003 01:13:29 PM |
| very nice photo....love the angle, and the composition |
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12/18/2003 12:04:59 PM |
| excellent capture.. the fog is beautiful :) |
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12/18/2003 10:47:53 AM |
| Great angle. Did the driver yelled at you for sticking your head out the window ? Nice hace and sharp detailling of this vehicle. |
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12/18/2003 04:19:50 AM |
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12/18/2003 04:06:01 AM |
| I´d see it in other view. 5 |
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12/18/2003 12:47:27 AM |
| A beautiful scene to be sure, but it appears that 1/3rd of it is obscured by your inclusion of the bus in the right of the image. To me, this detracts from the photo as I don't think the bus adds anything to the image. There isn't any nice reflection in it's windows, and it's black color makes the picture darker. It gives me a feeling of frustration as I want to peer around and see what's on the other side. |
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12/17/2003 11:53:19 PM |
| Thats a great photo. Nice one ! |
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12/17/2003 07:24:45 PM |
| Like this shot. Nice vantage point. Very good. |
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