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12/30/2003 11:26:50 AM |
Greetings from the Critique club
Great shot.
I would agree with most of the comments that the border is too heavy for this image.
You need a lot more photo to support that kind of treatment.
The image itself is wonderful. Your composition and use of the existing light is excellent.
I would suggest that to clean up the image by cloning out the background area by her arm would elevate the image even more. That area is distracting from the smooth lines of her body.
I might have left a bit more room on the right to give a little space behind her head.
All in all a fantastic shot
JC |
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12/26/2003 01:13:42 AM |
I gave you a "7" on this shot. I believe that the framing overwhelms the entire composition. The composition is interesting and fairly nice to look at but the borders seem to take over the shot.
The sweeping angle of the handlebars is something I really like in the shot. It makes your eyes look from the top of the shot toward the bottom.
The lighting at the event like most events are not the most disirable. A little more contrast on the girl would really help to make her pop out of the shot. Seems quite dark at the moment.
The blueish light helps to give something to focus in on in the shot and looks really nice. |
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12/22/2003 09:25:26 PM |
Nicely composed and nice pose of your model. The tones don't quite look right though. You did a great job of getting the metal look of the handlebars without terrible reflections, but the girl looks too... (red maybe?) Oh and your border is overbearing and really detracts from the image. It's the first thing I noticed.
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12/22/2003 02:09:25 PM |
| Not sure about the title, but this is a fabulous image. Very welldone. 10 |
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12/21/2003 01:35:52 PM |
| This shot is very nice, but the frame is way to heavy. |
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12/20/2003 08:03:57 AM |
| i tried to talk to this girl about motorcycles, but it didn't seem to be working.. her loss.. |
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12/19/2003 07:00:10 AM |
| I don´t think it is but the pic is good. |
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12/18/2003 09:32:48 AM |
| Interesting and different work. It´s a good picture to an advertising. 8 |
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12/18/2003 01:51:22 AM |
| The model is pretty, the lighting, color and detail very fine....wow does the frame kill this one for me..... it really distracts me from the image. |
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12/17/2003 10:07:41 PM |
| the border is overwhelming, IMO. Good comp, & lighting. |
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12/17/2003 09:25:53 PM |
| Interesting. Great framing. |
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12/17/2003 04:27:21 PM |
| And to a man's heart. You got my attention, like the blue light reflecting on the body. Good contrast as well. |
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12/17/2003 10:58:17 AM |
| I guess then my bike would be the way to a man's heart? LOL I think more of the bike and the girl is needed but your did the light control well. |
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12/17/2003 04:27:57 AM |
do not be sure!
excellent shot - 10 |
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12/17/2003 04:21:15 AM |
| Beautiful. The lighting really makes this work. |
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