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12/30/2003 12:01:15 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
The message I get from this photo is the unique art this company has on the side of its truck. The image was made under perfect lighting conditions: the three-dimensional nature of the art is apparent but the shadows aren't long or harsh. The focus is perfect, though a bit soft; I think some sharpening would make the photo a bit more snappy. Including the wheel and cobblestones provides the setting needed to understand what the image is about. I don't think the framing is quite right. There are distracting elements on the left and right sides that don't really add anything and could be cropped off. The arcs across the top are cut off, but it would have been nice to include them. If stepping back a foot when the exposure was made wasn't an option, a thin (2-3 pixel) black border would at least prevent them from "bleeding" out of the image. |
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12/23/2003 08:46:09 PM |
| very nice subject for this challenge. Yes, it transports a lot of animals and people. Good idea. Well done. |
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12/23/2003 11:35:24 AM |
| Good idea, and your subject is very nice. I still miss something, dunno. Maybe I would have chosen a different angle to make it more interesting. |
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12/22/2003 07:23:33 PM |
| I like the subject matter.....very colorful! |
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12/20/2003 09:28:17 PM |
| I would have scored this higher if you hadn't cropped it so close, I'd like to see the rest of the vehicle. |
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12/19/2003 05:07:03 PM |
| Wonderfull vehicle, but I would loved to see more of it. Technicaly a little too straight. Anyway, because of the great topic it's a 7 for me. |
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12/17/2003 10:52:55 AM |
| Focus is on the circus instead of the truck. |
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12/17/2003 02:59:02 AM |
| Bonne idée, jolie couleurs |
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