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05/27/2007 03:55:30 PM |
Hi from the Critique Club teammate!
Fit: I'll start by saying that I'm not sure why you worried about this before voting. It clearly has a vanishing point.
Composition: The composition has all the right things...level horison, horison not in middle, leading lines, etc. I do wonder if portrait was the best choice for this though. A landscape orientation may have enhanced the fenceline and thus the vanishing point. We'll not know unless we saw it ;)
Technical: Done well. As commenters said, a little blown in places. Good detail in the sand. I'm guessing that you could't get more from the clouds without destroying the sand?
Feel: The shot meets challenge well but does lack much for the viewer to connect with, hence the many 6's rather than something higher.
Good luck in the upcoming challenges (especially since we are on the same DPL team!)
PM me if you have any queries |
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05/23/2007 04:46:52 AM |
| excellent, ... i didn't vote but it would get 10 from me, highly underrated ! |
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05/23/2007 12:20:41 AM |
| Elegant and well realized. Got a 9 from me during the challenge. Congrats on top 20. |
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05/22/2007 11:29:51 PM |
| A little blown out on the left side. But I like this because it is nice and simple and meets the challenge. Not a lot of wow but it pleases me. 7 |
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05/21/2007 09:11:17 AM |
I'm a sucker for beach fence photos. :) Personally, I like this. The fence is probably more technically considered a leading line, but eh, I'm not sweating it. Did you fret about the lamp post at the end? Oops! Almost wondered whether you considered cloning it out, but this challenge is running under basic rules...nevermind. :P Actually, the lamp post, for me, works as a stop point. Helps keep me within the image. The sepia tone works well for the mood and emotive feel of a lonely beach on a cloudy day.
Best of luck to you in the challenge. |
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05/20/2007 12:53:30 AM |
| I like the moody light and monochrome. |
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05/19/2007 02:12:48 AM |
| Very good, it is enticing in its softness and muted palette. faved |
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05/18/2007 10:17:09 PM |
| Think I would have cropped so fence was on left edge otherwise good pic |
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05/18/2007 06:06:37 AM |
| An excellent choice for the challenge, nicely toned. |
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05/18/2007 04:56:41 AM |
I hope DPcers understand this picture. This picture should be in the top 10
There is two lines back and font sides of the fence 10 |
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05/17/2007 08:26:38 AM |
| Love it! The scene looks moody. Not quite a vanishing point, but close. |
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05/16/2007 10:46:57 PM |
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05/16/2007 07:08:12 PM |
| Really like the side effect of this photo....7 |
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05/16/2007 03:15:32 PM |
| I think it might have worked even better if the right side was cropped at the end of the fencing, instead of having the traffic light in the shot. However, it is a really nice show of vanishing point. |
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05/16/2007 12:05:58 PM |
| Balance, contrast, color, clarity and comp are excellent. This is the best of the bunch in my opinion...should get a ribbon. |
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05/16/2007 01:44:41 AM |
| This is all I ever ask for. Simple, beautiful, tells a little bit of a story (or lets me tell one). 10. |
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