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05/22/2007 07:52:20 PM |
| I like the idea, but needs a bit better composition. The light glare off of the horizontal bottle is a bit distracting as well, and the top of the carton needed to be there to complete the frame. The texture of the background seems silky too and I really that. |
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05/22/2007 07:14:21 AM |
| Is this the advertising challenge? |
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05/21/2007 04:41:22 PM |
| The idea is great. just a couple of things that you may want to watch out for: The product is to close to the background and you can see the strong shadows of the flash. If you can do it again I'll try use another light pointing at the background to create some separation. :) |
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05/20/2007 11:38:40 AM |
| Your lighting seems to harsh. A smaller lens opening would have made for more of the subject to be in focus. The red/white bottle is not focused properly. |
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05/18/2007 02:46:53 PM |
| Technically it meets the challenge but IMHO the subject matter and composition are not very compelling, sorry. |
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05/18/2007 01:09:48 PM |
| harsh light, needs a creative touch |
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05/18/2007 12:03:26 PM |
| This looks to planned out with harsh lighting. |
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05/18/2007 08:06:55 AM |
| An interesting "product shot" like image. The focus could be a bit more consistant from foreground to background. Also, the flash produced a reflection in the foreground bottle and created shadows which don't necessarily flatter the image. |
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05/17/2007 09:04:17 PM |
| lighting could be significantly better; although it was a nice try at product photography (nice try at a background and product arrangement) it needs some work |
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05/17/2007 10:53:02 AM |
| The lighting is a little harsh on both of the subjects but nice take on the challenge. |
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05/16/2007 07:12:51 PM |
| On camera flash reflections makes the photo look like a casual snapshot... |
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05/16/2007 01:26:10 PM |
| Having the top cropped off and the front one out of focus bothers me. I do like that you have them both angled to give depth to the shot. |
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05/16/2007 08:15:55 AM |
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05/16/2007 06:56:43 AM |
| good idea but this isn't for me |
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