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05/23/2007 02:11:39 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club.
Hi Clay,
Is this your leg?
A good concept - many of us have very positive connotations with beautiful, silky-smooth, shaved legs. Unfortunately you haven't really conveyed the idea of silky-smooth here. I think perhaps if there had been more smooth leg, and less ripples of foam it would have doen better. My main issue here is the lighting. There is a little bit of noise in the foam shadows and in the tiles in the background which indicates inadequate lighting. Was this shot under the normal bathroom lighting? The tiles in particular add nothing to the overall image - perhaps a closer crop on the leg would have worked. In conclusion - showing more leg is good.
It is my hope that these insights are helpful and constructive. Please feel free to PM me if you have any questions regarding this critique. And please remember to mark it "Helpful" if you found it so. Good luck with future challenges.
Cheers
Paul |
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05/21/2007 11:36:57 PM |
| Love the idea... Nothing more erotic than long silky smooth legs |
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05/18/2007 10:58:04 AM |
| nice job of doing what we have to do i like that you shave your legs |
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05/18/2007 08:27:40 AM |
| Like the image, though I don't particularly like the background |
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05/16/2007 11:22:33 PM |
| I was expecting alot more of this style, but i think your the only one |
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05/16/2007 06:47:19 PM |
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05/16/2007 03:35:01 PM |
| I like this one! I had this idea... but didnt do it. cute |
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05/16/2007 03:11:37 PM |
| I would like the composition more if the hand didnn't have rings and the smoooth strip was more visible, like rotated forward. Still., good job. |
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05/16/2007 03:02:22 PM |
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05/16/2007 10:57:32 AM |
| Nice take on the challenge. I like how the pink razor pops out of the image. |
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05/16/2007 07:23:25 AM |
| its glad to see someone has thought about doing something a bit different other than the usual chocolate and flowers! |
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05/16/2007 07:11:26 AM |
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05/16/2007 07:07:39 AM |
| nice idea. the tiles are a little distracting and i'd like more leg - well more visible silky smooth leg. |
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05/16/2007 01:39:40 AM |
| Now this is a good example of something that is silky and smooth. I love my womans legs after she shaves... |
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