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06/01/2007 05:47:02 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club.
Composition: The composition is your major let down here. You have cropped harshly over the tyre and left a vacant area on the right of the image making the bike point out of the image instead of the preferred into the image.
Technical: Focus and tones are good and the selective desaturation is selective but on topic.
Overall:Try a lower angle and maybe from a different point of view for more points.
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05/27/2007 03:27:49 PM |
| Great job!! Myself...I think I might have had the 'inner' bike have the color... might have been more striking! But great job nonetheless. (7) |
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05/25/2007 03:58:20 AM |
| A nice image let down, IMHO, by the cropping of the rear wheel of the bike. I would have liked to see the whole bike. A minor point for such an image. |
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05/21/2007 02:17:12 PM |
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