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01/04/2004 02:43:01 PM |
Critique Club:
I saw you ask about this in the forums, so I don't really have much to add.
Composition wise, you've tried to not center it, which normally is a good thing, but I don't really see any purpose in the black space to the left of the coin. Maybe a bit more space, or less, would improve the image.
I think just a close up of a coin, whilst fitting the macro theme of the challenge, just isn't very imaginative. This is what explains your low score in my opinion. I saw in the forums you were experimenting with different angles and things, which is what I would have suggested. |
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12/27/2003 12:55:00 PM |
| Good focus and detail at the top, then the DOF fades and can't see the rest. On this I would want to see all the detail throughout. Why did you choose this crop? Nice lighting though |
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12/23/2003 07:11:40 PM |
| Colorful coin (a bit out of focus?).... It is hard to achieve any 'real' composition with a shot like this (in a 2D plane). Possible critique: The shot could have been made more interesting (for example) by standing the coin on edge and illuminating it so as to cast a shadow beyond, adding another element to the shot. |
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12/23/2003 01:34:59 PM |
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12/22/2003 12:47:04 PM |
| seems a bit out of focus, although the coin is beautiful, to me it doesn't make a very interesting shot. |
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12/22/2003 09:21:53 AM |
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