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05/25/2007 11:29:23 AM |
| The dark upper-let corner is sorta distracting me on this one. Otherwise, I love the shot. |
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05/25/2007 09:15:38 AM |
I think this one is almost there...I think the extreme camera tilt is a little to far, maybe if it was tilted the other way. right now it looks like she is leaning up and aginst the tilt and the creates tension, as apose to her leaning with the tilt wouldn't create so much tension. maybe, I might be wrong about that. the big thing that bothers me though is her eyes, and how dark they are, I don't know how you use the lighting here, but if it's all natural just don't have her lean so much into the railing.
there are some major things I do like though. I love the body part of the pose and the arms and the legs make for great line, another reason why I think the tilt doesn't need to be so much. The hands are nice and soft they don't look to posed, the expression on her face really is nice too.
I think you are almost there with this one, but as is it's still a nice image. I would love to hear what the model thinks about it. |
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