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06/08/2007 06:45:22 AM |
None of the lighting issues bother me here with this photo. I am accepting it for what it is. The lady in the shadow seems perfectly lit and with her face being dark it gives it a sense of mystery. One questions her obscurity which makes the photo a little more interesting in my opinion. While technically flawed, the portrait has an element of interest to it. So yes, you succeeded.
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06/08/2007 06:19:49 AM |
Originally posted by alonzo4b:
Thanks for the comments. Clearly from the comments it appears that what I thought was interesting did not go over too well. The woman in the front is too hot and that was unintended. I did, however, intentionally put the woman in the back in the heavy shadow. I just thought that would be an interesting contrast between the two. I have a tendency to enter pics that are somewhat unconventional and perhaps my instincts are a bit off. |
i would encourage you to follow your instincts....the critiques offered on this sight defiantly have value but in my estimation there are no hard and fast rules in photography, you should ALWAYS shoot what you enjoy... |
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06/08/2007 05:56:45 AM |
| Thanks for the comments. Clearly from the comments it appears that what I thought was interesting did not go over too well. The woman in the front is too hot and that was unintended. I did, however, intentionally put the woman in the back in the heavy shadow. I just thought that would be an interesting contrast between the two. I have a tendency to enter pics that are somewhat unconventional and perhaps my instincts are a bit off. |
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06/07/2007 11:12:30 PM |
| Fascinating. Maybe it's cliche, but I'd love to see this in b/w. 8 |
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06/07/2007 09:54:28 PM |
| Composition and lighting both need a lot of attention. |
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06/07/2007 09:47:06 PM |
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06/07/2007 08:09:58 PM |
| very erotic shot - the lighting on both faces seem to need work - the woman in back is too much in shadows and the woman in front seems to be too blown out |
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06/07/2007 04:37:22 PM |
| Interesting choice of fabric 8 |
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06/07/2007 09:00:23 AM |
| Looks like an oil painting come to life. Disturbing but also riveting. |
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06/04/2007 05:38:31 PM |
nicely posed, great idea, unfortunately your lighting isn't up to it here. With the woman on the L looking at us with real eye contact, we need some light to see that. the shadows on her chest and cross don't work well either, the lighting on the other woman is a bit to harsh, but we could handle that
great effort, try again, don't be afraid to crop from the R for a bit more drama too
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06/03/2007 01:01:30 PM |
Great tit I mean title. HAHAHA Sorry I couldn't resist.... I think the make up is too much one the main model and it takes away from her actual face. Also the lighting is too strong on one and not enough on the other. But that is JMO.
Good luck with you're entry. |
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06/03/2007 12:48:18 PM |
| Too much eye make up on the right model. The shadow on the left model takes away from the picture, so it looks like the lighting isn't working for me |
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06/02/2007 09:02:52 PM |
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06/02/2007 04:47:35 PM |
| I wish the shadow didn't split the lady on the left in half. |
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06/01/2007 09:24:08 PM |
| Interesting shot. I am not sure that I like/know how to interpret they way that the one woman is (literally) throwing a shadow onto the other woman's face. If there was a special intent with this lighting, it was unfortunately lost on me. It just seems too hot on the cheek of the foreground subject, and too shadowy on the face of the background subject. |
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06/01/2007 07:25:19 PM |
| Nice work but the dark face is distracting. |
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06/01/2007 10:34:07 AM |
| Not real fond of the lighting here. |
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06/01/2007 07:04:58 AM |
| intesting tho a little too much shadow on the woman on the left /6 |
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