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06/07/2007 10:42:46 PM |
nice picture and lighting |
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06/07/2007 06:50:26 PM |
i think you did very well with the eyes - extremely sharp and well processed - but the lighting does not really flatter the rest of her face - it makes her face appear blotchy - and I doubt it really is |
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06/07/2007 12:32:04 AM |
Great portrait and your B&W conversion was nicely done. |
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06/06/2007 04:17:52 PM |
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06/06/2007 05:26:42 AM |
Not sharp enough, the eyes in particular should be razor sharp. Perhaps some USM? The stripey light is a nice idea, but I'm not fond of the mask effect on the eyes. The forehead looks unnaturally smooth. The expression is not too inspired, particularly the mouth. The background looks a little too burnt in, a little texture would help. Composition feels a little unbalanced, perhaps rule of thirds could have helped? |
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06/05/2007 11:26:48 PM |
the light is great, but the composition is dull, particularly with the black background. 5 |
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06/04/2007 08:00:50 PM |
I like the shadows & how the light falls on her eyes. |
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06/04/2007 12:50:59 PM |
Nice glow on the eyes, lighting is good, clearity is good. WTG |
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06/01/2007 02:49:34 PM |
Nice composition. The lighting is great and directs my eyes to her eyes. Although the whites of her eyes seem a tad bit too bright. Very nice portrait, as it is. |
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06/01/2007 07:41:43 AM |
I like the composition but feel it is lacking punch. |
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