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01/09/2004 12:33:08 AM |
Ramevi,
The composition of the photo is lacking. Concentrateing on a single orange or two with a few leaves would have helped out here. The light here is alo very strong, it completely overwhelmes the photo. A softer light (back or side) would have gotten your point accross a lot better and gave the photo some warmth.This in turn would have helped connecting your title with the photograph.Also by concentrateing on just a few oranges along with the light would have enabled you to get some detail which you lost because of wide angle used here.
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01/03/2004 03:32:29 AM |
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01/01/2004 12:06:38 PM |
| great picture but I can't tie it in to the challenge |
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12/31/2003 11:52:52 PM |
| Interesting concept but the burnout from the sun is distracting. |
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12/31/2003 02:39:46 PM |
| Good idea, but the sun is a bit glaring for my taste. Nice colours, they are just a bit out of focus because of the strong light, dunno. Just an opinion. |
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12/30/2003 03:06:23 PM |
| It's hard to get the sun to come out as something more than just a big hot spot in a photo. I think in this case it overpowers the rest of the picture and offers too much contrast with the soft leaves and fruit. |
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12/29/2003 01:01:17 PM |
| A pretty picture. But which is hope, faith? The tie between the the photo and the phrase is unclear. Also, there's a lot of dark green in the shot that could be cropped or lightened for better effect, I think. |
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12/29/2003 10:20:11 AM |
| Glare was a little distracting and kept your focus from being as sharp as it could have I think. |
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12/29/2003 05:55:19 AM |
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