My first impression: 5.
The first thing I notice is how tired the guy looks. He just doesn't seem happy to be fishing, and it doesn't really fit the title (he should be relaxed, not tired).
I love the backlighting though, it really sets up the morning idea and outlines his shape and the rod well.
Good focus on the fisherman, good sharpness on your main subject. The bushes to the lower right look really strange though, maybe blown out or some sort of compression artifact. In my mind, that hurts the image a lot because it looks unrealistic. Also, the grass and ground look a bit too yellow, but that may be due to the blown highlights.
I like the crop, showing all of the pole. You could probably get away with being tighter, maybe even a lot tighter (cropping out everything beyond a foot from his hands). That would highlight his tired look though.
I'll give this one a 5. I'd love to give it more, but there are a lot of technical problems, especially the weeds/bushes. You've got a good eye though, this definitely makes a good picture, his expression and some of the technicals are off. If you don't already, I recommend shooting raw, that might give you more ability to control highlights in a situation like this.
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