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06/17/2007 11:53:13 PM |
Nice photo. Crop that Starbucks umbrella out of there though. Way distracting. |
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06/17/2007 08:11:23 PM |
Love her expression. Great candid. |
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06/15/2007 09:17:45 PM |
Nice cndid shot, good dof and nice sharp shot, no idea what bff it thou, ahhh google knows all :) |
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06/14/2007 10:53:09 PM |
this works. The moment looks as if the closer person is abou tto turn around but doesn't want you to see. the comp is great and the focus is spot-on. The only thing that make is less classic is the starbucks sign because this could be anywhere any time - except there's the starbucks - not that there's anything wrong with strarbucks ;P 8 |
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06/13/2007 11:16:19 AM |
Not sure what the title means (hope I am not being stupid) but I do think this is a lovely candid and you have captured a wonderful expression in the girls face
Good job |
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06/11/2007 10:11:24 PM |
Nice capture - Love the look from the girl - Very cheeky. Just feel the cropping off of Starbucks would help as it's a bit distracting. |
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06/11/2007 10:01:29 PM |
A giggly moment...good capture but the foreground pole and cover is not necessary. Try cropping in. |
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06/11/2007 05:35:42 PM |
Ben Folds Five?
I would have gone with a much tighter crop on this. The girls expression is great, but the dead space 'dilutes' the photo. |
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06/11/2007 05:25:25 PM |
crop right down to it, we don't need to know it's starbucks - that doesn't strengthen your story. From the umbrella stand over, and from the bottom of the umbrella down makes this a full 2 points stronger in my book. 6 |
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06/11/2007 04:39:40 PM |
Charming moment and nice exposure. 8. |
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06/11/2007 01:57:48 PM |
It seems that she is has eye contact with the camera, and I like that. There is just a little too much empty space on the left side of the photo.. |
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06/11/2007 09:49:29 AM |
Strange. Having found such a scene, a moment, and then to undermine the entire faux-pictorial concept with that strange echo of the corpocratic world top right. Great job of pointing us one way only to deliver the solar-plexus blow with the hidden hand. It turns her from a pleasant looking girl having a giggle in a coffee shop into a victim, somehow. |
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06/11/2007 08:12:50 AM |
i like the tones you've used on this.
and the composition is great. |
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06/11/2007 05:03:58 AM |
don't look but I'm in a photo, like the sepia finish... |
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06/11/2007 04:37:46 AM |
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