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06/17/2007 04:57:47 AM |
Nice tight sharp shot. Good luck |
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06/16/2007 12:48:47 PM |
nice motion blur on the spongehand. 7 |
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06/16/2007 11:51:18 AM |
The motion blur on the hand and sponge contrasts nicely with the face, I think. Makes him (her?) look even more still and calm |
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06/14/2007 11:19:36 AM |
I would like to see more color in his face, not bad though.. |
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06/13/2007 06:23:18 PM |
I'm trying to figure out if I like the motion blur or not...
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06/13/2007 04:47:10 PM |
First impression: 6.
The subject is obvious, it fits candid, and the title fits well. The blur on the painter is ok since the boy (assuming it is a boy) is the subject. The color and texture on the boy's face is really great. Very sharp. And his closed eyes set a mood for the image.
There are a few things that hurt the image though. First, the background is a bit bright and distracting, especially right under his nose. I'm not sure what you could do about this, other than trying a different angle when you shoot. Speaking of angles, the profile is a bit extreme, I'd like to see more of an angle at his face (possibly over the painter's shoulder). I took a similar image of my daughter a few months ago, and my favorite shot was when she was looking at herself in the mirror (I was able to get both her reflection and her face).
Yeah, I'll stick with 6. A nice, close, personal image, but pretty static.
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06/13/2007 03:21:45 AM |
Nice and unusual, on my monitor some of the opranges around the nose and eye seem a little over exposed but still an appealing image |
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06/12/2007 08:16:37 PM |
Nice DOF, nice sharp focus on the face. I'm just curious why the fingers are so out of focus when they are at the same depth as the face. Did you purposely blur them? Not that it's affecting my score....just curious. |
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06/11/2007 10:44:03 PM |
Nice capture - Like the bold colours. |
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06/11/2007 05:15:15 PM |
love the blur on the hand - nice work |
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06/11/2007 10:09:34 AM |
good motion blur of the hand and a good title too. |
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06/11/2007 08:36:42 AM |
The photo would be much stronger if the hand was in focus. And a braver shot if the eyes were open. The background is a bit distracting. Composition feels a little unbalanced, I feel the face should have been more to the left. |
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06/11/2007 04:56:04 AM |
Good close up detail on his face. |
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