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06/20/2007 11:01:02 AM |
In voting I gave this image a 5. This image is composed well for the most part, but would have been greatly improved had you moved to the left a few feet so the pole was not coming out of his head and so that he would be standing in front of the white background - this would have allowed him to become the focus of the image. As with your other two posted, the focus here is soft. I would bet, with the lens you used, that you really cropped this down, resulting in the softness. |
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06/20/2007 10:33:13 AM |
I'd say you missed the essence of the Challenge while your shots does meet it in anoutside way.
If I took a picture of a guy that I know, who lied all the time...never told the truth and titled my shot "A Pure Bullshitter". Sure, it may be true and he may be pure in that but it's not what the Challenges voters were looking for. |
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06/20/2007 10:27:01 AM |
I think the image does say 'Pure Passion (for Jazz)' however I think the pole going through the man's head and the limited contrast between the head and the background have let this image down. |
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06/18/2007 01:06:52 PM |
IF the right background had been a little more contrasty or dark this would help to isolate person better. I wish the album was behind him so we could see both hands |
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06/15/2007 09:56:05 PM |
Lighting seems a bit off, and the signage in front are a bit distracting. |
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06/15/2007 11:02:07 AM |
would like to see a bit more detail in the shadows ... I love the old time feel to this image ... |
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06/14/2007 12:54:12 PM |
seems kind of busy... but the b/w is a nice touch |
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