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06/30/2007 01:14:46 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
Nice idea here, and well executed. Nice model (someone a peeping tom would be interested in!), and the lighting on her works well, giving nice skin tones and showing off her beautiful form. Good exposure and focus. The composition works well; the keyhole shape is great, and I like her head being partially obscured.
I wish more attention had been given to the background. I realize a real peeping tom doesn't care, but it's mildly distracting here. First, the part of the curtain right in front of the model is overexposed, which tends to pull the eye away from the subject. Second, the plant detracts from the photo both with it's shape and it's color. This very good photo would have been even better if the plant had been removed and the one part of the curtain been shaded from the light.
One more problem: the photo seems oversharpened. There are halos around the lines where dark meets light, and they seem unnatural.
But overall a good photo that deservedly did very well in the challenge. |
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06/27/2007 11:55:00 AM |
| Very sexy, very well done. |
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06/25/2007 12:51:12 PM |
I'm sure she knows you were there looking through the lock ;)
great photo and good concept! |
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06/25/2007 10:03:28 AM |
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06/25/2007 12:49:39 AM |
Nice finish. Love how this looks, but ya didn't give it up... Cut out in front of the lens?
TC |
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06/24/2007 09:00:37 PM |
| Good lighting. This isn't my kind of photo, but you did a tasteful and technically sound rendition. 6 |
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06/24/2007 03:12:27 PM |
OK... How did ya do the keyhole. Cardboard in front of the lens? Very cool take on the subject. Perfect focus and lighting. Awesome composition. Normally I would say you shouldn't cut the face off like this but here it works perfectly. After all if you're looking through a keyhole, what would you be lookin' at?
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06/23/2007 10:26:16 PM |
| Um, could we see some of the outtakes, say 8-10 shots later? ;-) A refreshing take on the inevitable butt shots this challenge was bound to spawn. I like it. |
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06/23/2007 10:24:12 PM |
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06/23/2007 04:46:20 PM |
| A great phot always tells a story. This is original and well taken. 10 |
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06/23/2007 02:39:48 PM |
| Nice keyhole effect. Love the postion of the left hand |
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06/23/2007 06:48:37 AM |
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06/22/2007 08:25:46 PM |
| good idea for the challenge, well shot |
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06/21/2007 07:42:01 PM |
| I almost feel naughty looking at this photo. Great idea and very well executed! I also like that you didn't include her entire head...makes it feel even more risque'. |
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06/21/2007 12:22:13 PM |
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06/20/2007 02:50:51 PM |
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06/20/2007 11:55:27 AM |
| Lovely. I really like this idea. Makes me feel like we're looking at something we're not supposed to see...adds a bit more mystery to the shot. Love it. |
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06/20/2007 05:55:20 AM |
| lol nice shot, the keyhole is just about perfect |
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06/20/2007 12:53:31 AM |
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06/19/2007 10:45:36 PM |
| good work at getting the subject so sharply focused. Having her head "cropped" out lends a sense of realism to it |
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06/19/2007 06:21:08 PM |
| Good idea, great execution. I just wish it didn't look so staged as in... a girl undoing her bathing suit in the classic shoulders back, hip out, looking over the shoulder, model pose. |
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06/18/2007 10:46:47 PM |
| Great concept! Exceptional clarity and composition! Sexy too~ *9* |
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06/18/2007 05:19:26 PM |
| Maybe not very original - but I still like it :) |
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06/18/2007 02:59:31 PM |
| This would be perfect if there was a little space between the keyhole and her left arm, very nice shot though....peeping toms scare me but this is a really nice picture |
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06/18/2007 11:27:02 AM |
| man how can you not like this! i mean...wait...does that make me a perv? oh well, like the lady and like the pp /10 |
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06/18/2007 07:28:24 AM |
| very nice idea well done. |
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