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06/26/2007 10:27:49 PM |
| Not fond of the lighting angle on the girl. maybe if a soft diffused light were added to her right side? I like the shadows on her body, dress and shoulder but the shadow on her left eye is what bothers me I think. You got the light bulb very nicely though and nothing seems too blown out to me. The clarity is good too. |
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06/26/2007 07:11:49 PM |
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06/25/2007 06:14:53 PM |
i like the portrait but the lightbulb is kinda cheesey
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06/23/2007 01:53:42 AM |
| Good concept. Unfortunately, it loses much of its impact on account of the poor focus. You're obviously got the creativity (which is the hard part) - just got to get the technicals right. |
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06/22/2007 10:06:26 PM |
| The side lighting is a bit harsh for the model and her soft dress. It is casting a bright shine on the right side of her face. Would like to be able to see a little more detail on the left eye. It might have worked w/out the lightbulb and same model as neg. space is good here. Softer light would give the "little girl and pink dress" look a bit more childlike features. Does that make sense? It's not a bad photograph by any means! :) |
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06/22/2007 01:31:26 AM |
| little blurry and soft, lighting a bit harsh in some spots, but very clever! |
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06/20/2007 11:35:47 AM |
| Minor point - would have liked to see girl a little sharper or a bit more in focus |
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06/20/2007 01:09:21 AM |
| girl could have been sharper, but good idea |
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