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01/22/2004 11:43:01 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Hits: This is a wonderfully thought out and executed photo. The natural framing you chose adds great impact to an already beautiful sunset. The bird in the scene, while a little small here, adds to the natural feeling and balance. The exposure looks well done. And the border works well here to frame the photo.
Misses: Not much to criticise here, but one small issue I "THINK" I see, though it's hard to tell at this size, is that the edge of the sillouetted opening looks just a tad softer than you would want the edge to be. That would stand out more in a larger print, but it's also something that could be handled by post processing, if it's even the case at all.
Ideas. Not much I would change here. The only suggestion I would have would be to see if the great asethetics can be improved even more by increase the relative area of the sunset by cropping the top and bottom a little tighter (making it more panoramic).
Great picture overall! |
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01/18/2004 11:55:59 PM |
| Great shot... Looks like an exotic sunset! |
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01/18/2004 09:43:07 PM |
| wonderful pattern. the lines and uneven edges amkes this shot sttractive. |
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01/17/2004 08:12:23 AM |
| Nicely framed sunset. The monochromatic sky is something I usually don't like, but I think its kinda neat when its sandwiched between these 2 rock forms 8 |
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01/16/2004 11:35:45 PM |
| I love how this is framed. |
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01/16/2004 08:44:12 PM |
| Like this shot here, looks as though you tore off a section of a piece of paper and beneath it is this sunset. |
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01/16/2004 07:52:07 PM |
| Nicely seen! I really enjoy the framing with the crag and the mountains. Lots of drama here! |
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01/15/2004 05:07:53 PM |
| I like this. The overhang adds a great touch. Where was this taken? |
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01/15/2004 06:00:48 AM |
| Nice photo...good composition. |
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01/15/2004 01:49:59 AM |
I believe the name of the challenge was 'After dark' not 'Just before after dark happens'...
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01/14/2004 12:06:16 PM |
| The sky colors are beautiful, and the framing is really interesting. What is the top section of the frame? |
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01/13/2004 06:41:16 PM |
| Good entry for the just before after dark challenge :) |
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01/12/2004 09:01:02 PM |
| nicley composed, interesting sky. Good decision about the boarder - this shot is helped by it - somehow the orange on the right that touches the orange in the photo bothers me (slight negative) One of my picks for a ribbon. 9 |
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01/12/2004 08:44:32 PM |
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01/12/2004 08:21:23 PM |
Technical: fits the challenge. Exposure lighting composition focus all good.
Personal: I wish you'd used all 640 pixels and made the border a little less wide. On my monitor there is a line of tiny lights, but it's too dark to be able to tell what I'm looking at. I love the color though, this looks to be a great photo.
My vote: 6
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01/12/2004 09:55:57 AM |
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