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08/03/2007 10:18:52 PM |
| this is a great idea, in my opinion what lowered your scored was your composition, in other words, i think the camera almost at level with the paper would have given this a more dramatic effect. |
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07/28/2007 02:51:02 AM |
Greetings from the critique club!
I think the general consensus is that this was a pretty neat idea. Despite what the one previous comment mentions most people would say this is creative. The other consensus however is that a different angle would help.
That aside, I see you mentioned you were stumped for ideas. Even though this was the first paper challenge there are a lot of "paper" pictures on this site. (Go under photos then search). Even Google can help. Not just by seeing pictures but reading about different related topics.
In the end this is still pretty good shot for your second entry. I'm sure we'll be seeing you improve over the weeks. |
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07/27/2007 03:12:16 AM |
| rather boring image ,there is no drive and no creativity . You obviusly have run out of ideas and looks like lost desire to put more effort. Next time better luck ,try to aprieciate others photography to achieve. |
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07/25/2007 02:41:31 AM |
| Very intriguing, both the paperwork and the photo - looks metallic. Like the lighting as it is. |
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07/24/2007 03:20:45 PM |
| That's pretty neat (although somber). |
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07/23/2007 10:53:39 PM |
| wow, that took some work, and an exacto knife huh? |
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07/23/2007 01:21:27 AM |
| Although depressing, this is a great shot! |
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07/22/2007 11:20:43 PM |
| What an interesting piece. I think your choice of composition was good for this entry. |
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07/21/2007 10:39:18 AM |
| Good idea, maybe would benefit from a little lower angle for more depth. |
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07/20/2007 09:05:29 PM |
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07/20/2007 12:35:28 PM |
| nice work. I'd also like to see this in closer, with an angle a little lower down to the paper |
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07/20/2007 02:53:56 AM |
| The setup is black and white, but desatting it has lost the subtle colours of reality, so it looks a little blank. Nice pseudo shadows though. |
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07/18/2007 04:33:09 PM |
i like the idea and appreciate the work might have gone behind this shot. congratulation on the success.
I just learned about Peter Callesen and his work from one of the entries in this challenge. I will have to try this myself. |
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07/18/2007 03:08:57 PM |
| I wish I couldn't see all that black space around it! Good pop up tho =) |
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