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07/30/2007 06:16:03 AM |
| As I recently lived (and hope to live again) in a place where sights like this are very common, I'd have seen the "link" right away - the parts now missing where the vine was trimmed away. Of course, that may not have been what you intended, but that's what I see with respect to the challenge. Beyond that, I really like the picture. |
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07/27/2007 07:25:51 AM |
Greetings from the critique club :)
First of all I just want to say Huh? I am sorry, I just don´t get this shot, or rather, I don´t get how it ties in with the challenge and thus I probably would have voted it a 4 if I had voted in this challenge, knocking off a couple of points for my own lack of vision on how it ties in with the challenge. At least I am honest :)
I guess you were going for that life (the branches) and dead objects (the stones) don´t have a link cause they are alive and dead? Best I can come up with, sorry dude... :P
Aaaaanyway I do like the shot, only gripe I have with it is the tie in with the challenge. It´s well exposed, got great b/w tones and I like the clay like texture you were able to bring out in the stones, whole shot looks like the branch and stones were covered in mud wich I like about it. I probably would have voted this shot a 6 if the challenge had simply been black and white. Composition is not what I would call good but not bad either, a little bit shot too much straight on the subject or an ordinary vantage point, maybe another angle would have appealed more to me personally but like I said, it´s not bad.
I don´t know what else to say buddy so I´ll just say kind regards from Iceland, Lárus. |
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07/26/2007 09:00:33 AM |
| My lord, Marcel Duchamp once lived in Tewksbury NJ? The things you learn on this site. :) Very nice range of tones here, and I like how the vines branch up and slowly spread through the frame. |
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07/22/2007 09:32:51 PM |
| Underexposed in many areas. |
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07/18/2007 07:28:01 PM |
| I would have liked to have seen alittle more pop in this one.. |
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07/18/2007 05:59:23 PM |
| Very nice texture and composition. |
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07/18/2007 09:14:46 AM |
| I would have liked to see this shot in color |
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07/17/2007 09:06:55 PM |
| Wonderful image, great composition and processing. |
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07/16/2007 01:28:10 AM |
| Sorry doesn't do much for me. Maybe the lighting could be improved?? I am not sure what to suggest here. |
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