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08/01/2007 07:55:19 AM |
I LOVED this entry Jon - Well done! |
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07/25/2007 10:43:49 PM |
I like the composition with the tail starting in the corner. I like that the crane is floating on a sea of origami paper. Beautifully matches the title. |
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07/25/2007 03:35:43 AM |
wow jon, a wonderful story to go with your excellent paper challenge entry .. love your title .. :) |
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07/25/2007 12:09:38 AM |
This is quite amazing, and I actually read this story when I was in the 4th grade, or about 10 years old. Very inspiring, to say the least. Very impressive and lovely image. |
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07/24/2007 05:18:58 PM |
I really like the composition and the different patterns in the origami paper, but the lighting looks a little flat. |
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07/24/2007 03:56:38 PM |
I think the light comes from the wrong side in this case. |
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07/22/2007 11:48:26 PM |
The business of the background coupled with the point of view of the camera takes a bit away from the subject. |
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07/20/2007 12:49:16 PM |
Makes me think of the origami kits I've owned. I always enjoyed contemplating the potential of all those interesting pieces of paper, but was never very pleased with them once I'd mangled them into some three-dimensional form. |
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07/20/2007 03:20:09 AM |
Nice setup, but I'd like to see more light on the crane, and less on the background. |
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07/18/2007 10:07:08 PM |
the sea has a vew waves in it. |
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07/18/2007 09:17:09 AM |
very lovely, but a tad too pale over all |
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07/18/2007 09:09:01 AM |
IMO the colours here seem a little washed out |
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