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02/05/2004 01:07:34 AM |
hei from the critique club
the image is very sharp and has a good tonal range with good darks, lights and middle tones. The white is on the verge of dissapearing but is still hanging in there. On the background to the right there are some lines i find distracting. Perhaps if you used a smooth background you could get rid of this. The placement of the eye was well executed, and is in an attractive spot, perhaps this picture suffers from poor lighting.. perhaps that is being a bit hypocritical to what i said before about tones... but there seems to be a main light source from the left which is blowing out the hair on the left, making a glare in the eye, and making akwardly lit subject. Perhaps if you used a difused light source on the other side, or repositioned your light source that would help. The image is almost abstract in nature, which could work effectivly, but something still seems to be missing. I am not sure what. perhaps play with including more of the rabit, or closer or different lighting. hope some of these sudjestions helped...
and remember.. it is only my opinion |
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01/29/2004 10:43:16 PM |
Wow a very nicely focused shot Id love to see the rest of it Nice detail
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01/29/2004 09:13:04 PM |
Very nice shot, but I wish we could have seen more of the rabbit. |
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01/29/2004 08:25:00 PM |
It's a rabbit? It's a little to close to tell for sure. Is it a real one or a stuffed on? Can't tell. This shot brings up a lot of questions in my mind...
TC |
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01/29/2004 01:07:11 PM |
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01/27/2004 03:55:34 PM |
Maybe too tight, but a nice shot all the same... |
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01/26/2004 12:14:39 PM |
Nice profile, very sharp focus...nice. |
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01/26/2004 03:28:37 AM |
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01/26/2004 02:41:05 AM |
Very odd sensation, looking into this rabbit's eye! Great shot. |
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01/25/2004 09:10:49 PM |
A good macro pic is hard to find on this site.... Especially of somthing alive! Nice job. I wish I could vote, I'd give you a 9. I kinda think a black background would have been a dramatic contrast. |
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01/25/2004 05:24:22 PM |
Nice close-up. All that wonderful warm fur and wiskers, and big shiny black eye on the thirds line - well thought out. The snowy background works well, and the shadowy edge of the rabbits nose contrasts well with the white/blue of the snow. 8 |
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01/25/2004 07:43:02 AM |
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01/25/2004 12:43:11 AM |
love the tight crop on this one. that eye is very captivating. |
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01/25/2004 12:10:37 AM |
I like this, except the flash in his/her eye. |
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