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09/01/2007 02:55:02 PM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: Great depth of field use. I really like the way your subject is isolated from the background. Even still, I think the bid itself needs a bit more focus.
Lighting: Again, nicely used lighting to isolate your subject.
Composition/Content: The composition is lacking. I agree with Trinity_12_12 in that the crop is far too tight on the bird's wings. Beyond that, the overall composition is too centered for my liking.
My Opinion: Not a bad score, but with better composition a a little better focus, I think your score might have pushed up near 6.
Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric
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08/26/2007 04:26:45 PM |
Nice depth, great capture, wish the image size was bigger, but this is nice, 8. |
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08/26/2007 12:04:21 PM |
nice capture mid flight - would have liked this one not cropped as tight |
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08/25/2007 02:50:53 PM |
Beautiful bird and so clearly captured. |
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08/24/2007 05:54:25 PM |
I feel the crop is a little tight with the wings touching the edges of the frame but I like the background as it makes the bird stand out really well. The bird seems a bit over bright though as a lot of the texture of the feathers has been lost. |
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08/23/2007 12:56:49 AM |
Looks out of focus to me and highlights are blown out a tad. |
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08/22/2007 09:53:31 PM |
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08/22/2007 01:06:33 PM |
Good shot. I know how dificult those can be. The angle could be better. |
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08/21/2007 07:01:31 PM |
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08/20/2007 06:33:25 PM |
Really like the image, capture the simplicity of the bird nicely. Also created a good contrast between the bird itself and the background behind it. Nice shot |
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08/20/2007 02:50:21 PM |
Beautiful color & composition. If sharper, it would be a clear winner. |
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08/20/2007 09:03:09 AM |
Nice capture, the green bokeh really makes him stnad out. I'm guessing he was a captive one with the bands around his feet? |
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