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The Universe According to a Nine Year Old
The Universe According to a Nine Year Old
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Challenge: Free Study 2007-08 (Expert Editing)
Collection: 2007 Challenges
Camera: Nikon D70
Lens: Nikon AF-S DX NIKKOR 18-200mm f/3.5-5.6G ED VR II
Location: Shot in Savoy Illinois
Date: Aug 18, 2007
Aperture: Multiple Shots
ISO: 200
Shutter: Multiple Shots
Galleries: Diptych / Triptych, Children
Date Uploaded: Aug 23, 2007

Visiting Grandma usually brings about visits to parks. Grandma can sit and watch and the kids can run around. With each passing year, the kids get a little bigger and the playgrounds seem a little smaller. My oldest is 'done' with playgrounds, but James still has the glint in his eye and enjoys the visits to the neighborhood playscape.

I took these photos while watching the kids play on the playground. The light was really pretty good and my son seemed to be having a great time. I didn't think I had anything to enter the Free Study this month, but I wanted to put together a tribute to the fast fleeting moments of my kid's youth.

Here is my best effort. I hope it is liked by DPC half as much as I do, but I gather these are not super DPC friendly...

Pretty standard processing on each individual image - curves, exposure, and hue/saturation adjustment. Noise Ninja to smooth out a little and add some local contrast. Saved each individually and built collage in successive layers.

Score prediction: 5.8

Post Challenge: It finished about where I expected...Thanks for the two comments during voting. I really appreciate - the one from luv2photo - very informative about choice of eye contact etc.

Originally had planned to enter the bottom right image alone, but the Expert editing got me to thinking that a collage would work better - but it probably didn't...



Statistics
Place: 323 out of 503
Avg (all users): 5.5674
Avg (commenters): 6.5000
Avg (participants): 5.5263
Avg (non-participants): 5.6522
Views since voting: 725
Views during voting: 210
Votes: 141
Comments: 3
Favorites: 0


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09/08/2007 08:22:12 AM
Peter - this is a great triptych. It is something your family will cherish forever, which is worth a lot more than a high score in a virtual photography challenge! I especially like the bottom right photo. It's eye-catching.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
09/05/2007 03:49:52 PM
Very strong triptych. All 3 images are very sharp, colorful, and well cropped. Very nicely done.
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09/02/2007 11:45:59 PM
I thing I would like this better if he were not looking at the camera for all three shots. I would have liked to see him more at play, more natural.
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