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09/29/2004 09:13:49 AM |
hollowpoint bullets... right?
Very nice picture though :) |
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02/08/2004 10:45:06 PM |
| Nice job positioning the pistol at an unusual angle. I'll try to avoid those extra-lethal bullets. |
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02/07/2004 11:49:57 PM |
Excellent rendering with an explicitly commercial feel to it.
Minor but critical defects:
The near-centered target (background) skews the composition by thirds (foreground).
The far edge of the glass shelf (foreground) suffers from a anti-clockwise tilt, neither strong enough to add a dynamic nor imperceptible enough to be ignored.
A little more (reflective shelf) space in front of the gun may make for a more pleasing whole.
Because of the strong mercantile presentation, particularly when associated with a gun, I cannot rate this shot as well as I might have without these obvious aspects.
> 3 in my book; 4 in the context of this challenge. |
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02/07/2004 09:46:57 PM |
I would have love to seen this with just a black background. Awesome job on the gun and amo. Very cool...the target in the back blows it for me. Great concept!
I'd recommend a little more foreground, so we can see the top of the bullets reflect, and a solid well lite background. This is a really good photo minus that target. |
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02/07/2004 01:35:40 PM |
| Well taken photo. I think it needs a litle room at the bottom of the frame. Its just a little too crowded. Good idea and well shot. |
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02/06/2004 04:19:13 AM |
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02/05/2004 05:32:28 PM |
| Great work at keeping lighting glares to a minimum. |
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02/05/2004 11:09:31 AM |
| is that an airsoft gun? (red tip) Great composition, technically sound. I like the border too. |
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02/05/2004 01:16:20 AM |
| nice image. I like the target in the background |
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02/04/2004 04:41:20 PM |
| Nicely done. Looks like you might be low and to the left. What is red color inside the barrel? |
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02/03/2004 08:03:19 AM |
| Nice setup of the gun and amo. frame and target bit destracting. |
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02/03/2004 06:18:53 AM |
| Great rendering of the metallic textures - both shiny and dulled, and I like the reflective surface. I find the out-of-focus target in the background disturbing. |
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02/03/2004 01:25:02 AM |
| Good capture of the pistol and bullets - target in the background is a nice touch. Pistol looks like an early 1980's AMT Hardballer - I'm sure adjustable rear sights, higher profile front sight and adjustable trigger would up your score :) That, and those light weight Hydra-Shock bullets will jam if you don't convert to a lighter after market recoil spring. |
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02/02/2004 06:55:48 PM |
| Not crazy for the white line. but I think the shot is done well, good composition. |
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02/02/2004 06:54:31 PM |
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02/02/2004 12:05:54 PM |
| Great shot (no pun intended). I like the way the target is blurred in the background. |
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02/02/2004 11:03:34 AM |
| sorry, but i have to disagree. these do not go together at all. |
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02/02/2004 08:10:15 AM |
| well done, like the dof on the target. |
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02/02/2004 12:37:16 AM |
| With all of the reflecting potential of the metal surfaces, this image is exposed beautifully |
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