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09/27/2007 02:54:41 AM |
cool shot! reminds me of the fill the frame challenge.
good luck with your future entries. |
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09/18/2007 11:27:05 PM |
Eyes are "open" not OPENING. |
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09/18/2007 06:42:58 PM |
Critique:
Topic (out of 4): Feel it's rather bland, yet still within the guidelines 2
Photo (out of 6): Focus seems to be lower lid? Like the colors though, 3 |
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09/18/2007 11:17:42 AM |
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09/18/2007 10:51:09 AM |
nice original angle and composition. Shame about the messy mascara and eyeliner - especially seeing as the lower eyelid seems to be the focal point. |
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09/18/2007 07:31:17 AM |
Just a suggestion here..if one has to take such a close up and a tight crop of the eye, i feel it would be better if the lashes were made up better and the liner did not smudge the lower eyelid |
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09/17/2007 08:53:07 AM |
Lovely eye, but the light source needed some diffusion. |
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09/16/2007 09:51:08 PM |
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09/16/2007 06:33:18 PM |
For an effective eye picture the corneal reflection and iris should be much sharper. |
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09/15/2007 11:59:24 AM |
The mascara clumps don't help you on this one. The reflection on the eye is a bit strong (don't know what you can do about that - you're taking a picture of a rounded shiny surface). I like the different angle. This makes me feel like I'm watching someone and am almost an intruder in the moment. Nice focus, DOF, & lighting. |
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09/14/2007 11:06:28 AM |
would have been prefered the focus on the eye, rather than the eyelashes.. but its still cool |
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09/13/2007 01:05:27 PM |
I like the bits of smudged mascara. It gives the photo a little more character. Nice focus! I really like this photo! 9! |
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09/12/2007 09:03:55 PM |
The mascara smudge is my favorite part. Nice shot. |
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09/12/2007 04:14:12 PM |
a lttle more negative space would have helped IMHO.. |
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