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02/06/2004 09:02:58 PM |
The bottom of the wall is a little distracting. It's an interesting concept, but the photo comes off a little boring. |
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02/05/2004 11:00:58 AM |
I like it... The only thing that I´d change is the white and old wall... Try it in another wall... |
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02/04/2004 11:45:40 PM |
Great composition! Love the way you filled the frame. A couple of small disrtactions: The jaggie lnes on the bottom of the image (cracks on the wall?) pull my eye like a magnet. Also Your shadow is sharper around the stool and back of the subject but fuzzy around the hand and head. If you could rearrange the subject/lighting to make the head/hand sharper it would be a superb shot!
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02/04/2004 09:32:36 PM |
Rodan? I am gong to make this comment in all seriousness: this shot might be more effective if the subject were not wearing clothing. . . preferablly nothing (except maybe underware). The clothing gives the figure a round shape without dimension or too much form. I am not sure if that is a hood of a shirt or a shoulder in back of the neck. Also, there needs to be some negative space, in this case light, in the form to give it shape. For example under the arm. Hope this was helpful and not hurtfull. |
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02/04/2004 07:40:14 PM |
Nice shadow that you have :P |
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02/04/2004 10:41:39 AM |
Neat composition, with a nice choice of background - not too plain but not obtrusive. |
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02/03/2004 09:47:58 PM |
this has a well defined shadow that is very expressive in its pose. I wish the subject wasn't so crowded in the frame however. |
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02/03/2004 01:45:56 AM |
I like this and the mood. |
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02/03/2004 01:10:21 AM |
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