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09/22/2007 11:02:42 AM |
Critique Club feedback -
This is a very nice shot. Good use of perspective to add interest and the depth of field works well with the subject. I like how the jelly beans are the primary focus here, with a wealth of other goodies setting the scene.
Overall it's a fine shot and it received a good score to match. Really the only thing that would keep the shot from scoring higher is some sort of excitement factor - a hand reaching into the jar, a person browsing the aisle - something to give it a spark of life.
Again though, as it is this is a good shot and it placed well as it should.
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09/17/2007 12:38:53 AM |
Well done! Should have scored higher I think. Makes me feel like a kid in a candy store! :) |
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09/15/2007 12:20:23 AM |
Love how you used DOF to keep your image from being too busy. Your image is colorful, yet warm. Very nice! |
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09/14/2007 12:13:48 PM |
This looks like a WONDERFUL place to visit. You don't really see stores like this any more. Good find! |
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09/14/2007 11:02:50 AM |
Great thought, nice photo. |
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09/14/2007 10:22:42 AM |
I realy like this one but possibly a little less DOF to bring a couple more jars in to focus mite kick it up a bit IMHO. nice pic though :)
-dave |
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09/12/2007 11:16:01 AM |
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09/11/2007 09:22:17 PM |
Great lighting and point of focus |
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09/11/2007 06:49:26 PM |
The background and floor is not working for me. |
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09/11/2007 02:08:38 AM |
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09/10/2007 10:39:05 PM |
the perspective is good as is the shallow DOF and background - it just doesn't jump off the screen 6 |
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09/10/2007 10:22:46 PM |
I like this...but, I would have cropped off the top 1/2" of the image and lose the black portion of the ceiling. |
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09/10/2007 12:13:19 PM |
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09/10/2007 10:08:00 AM |
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09/10/2007 06:57:06 AM |
A shame it ends really... |
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09/10/2007 04:27:54 AM |
nice bokeh and composition. |
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09/10/2007 01:10:46 AM |
Wow, I like this one! Great use of narrow DOF. Beautiful colours. Hope you do well in the challenge. |
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