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02/18/2004 03:07:34 PM |
It's so weird--I probably proofread this thing like 100 times and i never caught that extra "is" :D |
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02/17/2004 07:40:20 PM |
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02/17/2004 04:54:33 PM |
I like the realistic here |
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02/16/2004 06:34:35 PM |
First sentence is hard to understand because of "is" -- detracts from message of the photo. |
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02/15/2004 09:58:40 PM |
beautifully composed.
i love the concept.
i love the composition.
i love this photograph.
beautifully done in black and white.
continue with beautiful work.
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02/14/2004 09:33:39 AM |
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02/14/2004 02:02:11 AM |
I am sure you've already got like 500 comments about sentence error. But I would really like this picture witout the word "is."
5. |
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02/13/2004 05:44:58 PM |
I think positioning the rings further in and down a little would strengthen composition. Black and white works well as does harsh lighting. |
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02/13/2004 12:23:16 PM |
I love the way the coil, holes, and shadows look on the left side.... But as for the entirety of the picture.... sorry... |
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02/13/2004 03:53:47 AM |
How sad and I think sweetie is not the best thing to say when your leaving
Anyway having said that this is a good image and nicely done 7 |
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02/12/2004 07:44:14 PM |
man how popular is breaking up with letters? lol cool pic (; |
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02/12/2004 06:30:09 PM |
looks a bit fabricated, but nice image... the "teardrops" definitelly add to the whole thing. I like it BUT... I just can't rate this higher than 8... I hope you understand. |
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02/12/2004 03:06:13 PM |
"can't go through with this is"? unless i'm missing something, seems like a bit of a grammatical error. i think the picture might've come out slightly better if you had either torn off the piece on the very left, or used a type of notebook/composition that better complemented the rings (maybe just because i'm still in school - but the choice of notebook makes me think "student"). still, a good photograph with a nice use of lighting. the tear drops are a good thought, as well. |
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02/12/2004 04:30:01 AM |
Great picture, so I have given you a good score, but you should have checked what you wrote - "... with this is." ??? |
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02/12/2004 01:59:51 AM |
Very nicely done... I give it an 8 |
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02/12/2004 01:28:54 AM |
Very strong photograph. Nice composition and great choice of B&W. |
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02/11/2004 09:24:35 PM |
nice added effect with the 'tears' ;) |
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02/11/2004 10:20:01 AM |
this is what?
nice pic though 6 |
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02/11/2004 09:30:40 AM |
Ok, it´s very emotive. I´m drying my keybord. But it´s photograph. The texts apeal to other sensorial areas of the brain. A picture needs to be an universal language. Remaber this. |
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02/11/2004 07:08:18 AM |
very well done.....Looks real! ....9 |
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02/11/2004 05:40:10 AM |
No... But why??? What have I done?? noooo...!!!!! ;))
And, who's the other guy? :) |
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02/11/2004 04:58:46 AM |
This is a well executed shot. I feel though that most of these sadness/parting shots in this challenge must be contrived (I hope so!). After a while I felt this does actually deprive the shot of the authenticity that I feel is part of photography. So I mark all such shots down 1 point equally - can't be fairer than that. |
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02/11/2004 02:14:18 AM |
sweeet shot. well capured. i'm sorry if this is real. i understand mate |
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02/11/2004 01:09:34 AM |
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02/11/2004 12:21:19 AM |
B&W works really well with this. The photo is very expressive. The tears and rings add a lot of emotion to it. Good luck... |
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