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09/23/2007 02:06:40 PM |
Awesome tones and exposure control. |
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09/23/2007 11:45:19 AM |
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09/23/2007 08:22:08 AM |
The subject has been lost in the lack of colour and the dark tones. |
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09/22/2007 11:01:03 PM |
I know that not every monitor is calibrated the same (and I have gotten mine close to calibrated to the scale that occurs at the bottom of this text box during voting) but on my screen the image appears too dark for me to fully appreciate all the details. You caught a nice gleam on the surface of the blade but the bottom right hand portion of the blade and the handle fade into the black backdrop. Mayhap adding another light source to the right hand side and angled to illuminate the handle and right half of the blade would even out the lighting and show us more detail. Next, I don't think that the B&W composition really complements the overall image. Yes, it does showcase texture and details but sometimes color can add a visual punch to the photo composition. I am guessing by the textures on the apple that it was of the red delicious variety. If correct, then wouldn't that punch of deep red (that would invoke the idea of the color of blood) look better balanced on the sharp edge of the knife? I am thinking that the red would visually pop off the silver of the knife and the black background. Not to mention the red of the apple will just heighten the viewer's awareness of the sharpness of the knife for the color invokes the thought of blood. |
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09/20/2007 11:58:34 PM |
A much more dark and sinister version. Could use a little more detail but overall I like it. |
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09/20/2007 09:03:40 PM |
Very well done, just a little too dark. |
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09/20/2007 08:40:17 PM |
Too dark IMO, and the partial desat was one of the strong features of the original. |
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09/20/2007 08:37:01 AM |
very nice, did you create a version where the apple is red? |
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09/19/2007 11:40:13 AM |
I don't so much mind that this is in black & white, but it just too dark overall. I'd like to see more detail. |
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09/19/2007 12:31:53 AM |
Nicely photographed. On the edge is right! |
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09/18/2007 06:57:05 AM |
not too close to the original, but has it's own qualities. a tad too dark overall, though. |
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09/17/2007 10:13:39 AM |
it is too underexposed for my liking 4 |
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09/17/2007 05:44:27 AM |
uh-huh. lighting? you can hardly see this image. |
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09/17/2007 05:42:41 AM |
This appears a little dark to me but otherwise well done. |
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09/17/2007 05:04:26 AM |
The apple looks soft on my monitor, I would like to see a bigger dynamic range if that makes sense... |
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