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The Lotus at Tulip Hill
The Lotus at Tulip Hill
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Challenge: Free Study 2007-09 (Advanced Editing V)
Camera: Canon PowerShot S2 IS
Location: Tulip Hill Winery, Nice, CA
Date: Sep 13, 2007
Aperture: 3.5
ISO: 50
Shutter: 1/800
Galleries: Floral
Date Uploaded: Sep 29, 2007

Took this at a winery called Tulip Hill while I was waiting for my parents while they were wine tasting. Took a while to get a good perspective since I was so far away (about 15 feet) and I was suprised how well the focus turned out. Quite a lot of editing involved-the biggest thing was cloning out a bunch of white water spots on the lily pads and even though they still look a bit splotchy I think it looks pretty good. I hope people like the background being so dark. It was originally brighter but it made the lotus look washe out so I went for more contrast. Lost some of the detail with the neatimage and I reallllllly hope people don't comment on this as being OOF, but we'll see-the DOF is pretty slim...eeek. Hope I don't regret this, I think it's a good one, but not excellent.

Statistics
Place: 379 out of 503
Avg (all users): 5.3740
Avg (commenters): 5.2222
Avg (participants): 5.3736
Avg (non-participants): 5.3750
Views since voting: 755
Views during voting: 176
Votes: 123
Comments: 20
Favorites: 1 (view)


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10/05/2007 03:35:03 PM
Beautiful composition and subject. It just looks very dark. I would like to see it brighter and more vibrant.
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10/05/2007 01:10:53 PM
Beautifully worked picture - very nice presentation.

Nice work.
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10/05/2007 06:10:39 AM
good composition, but way underexposed
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10/04/2007 06:41:30 PM
Lovely positiioning. The image lacks the right lighting to really bring the flower out and off the screen.
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10/04/2007 06:32:56 PM
Very nice! I like the detail in the soft light. 7
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10/04/2007 12:23:58 AM
avg vote, it is a pretty picture but would like to see a bit more of the leaves and smaller size flower. The darkness of the backdrop is good but then for it to appeal to me I would like to see the rich yellow and a whiter white peddles on teh flower. Its a good angle on the flower... maybe a little more dof but i'm not sure on that or if something else
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10/03/2007 11:24:34 PM
Great shot nice composition. I would like to see a litle more light to bring out the pettles of the flower.
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10/03/2007 08:47:20 PM
pretty image, wish the lighting was a bit more dramatic, seems a bit flat. Overall good composition and focus.
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10/03/2007 06:21:06 PM
Good simple composition but feels a bit flat in color and lighting.
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10/02/2007 10:48:12 PM
Nice composition but it seems a bit dark on my monitor. I would have liked to see the blossom "pop" a bit more
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10/02/2007 10:07:48 PM
nice shape and composition. the lighting is too dark for me though. it would have really worked well with the dark lighting around the flower imo.
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10/02/2007 05:05:30 PM
Nice photo and with a good composition, the entire image is a little dark on my calibrated monitor.
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10/02/2007 12:41:47 PM
Nicely composed. Could be a little sharper, though.
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10/02/2007 10:24:02 AM
I like the idea of this but it seems rather dim if that makes sense. You could do a duplicate layer in screen mode and it would brighten the entire image and then you could adjust the opacity. It works well and doesn't distort anything.
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10/02/2007 02:39:18 AM
nice composition, but colors very muted
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10/01/2007 10:52:26 PM
This is pretty and I like the composition. I wish the flower petals were brighter so that it would make the flower pop out from the background a bit more.
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10/01/2007 09:51:03 PM
Tad too dark.
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10/01/2007 02:22:53 PM
Love the composition and the patterns in the lily and on the leaves. The photo looks just a bit too dark on my monitor.
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10/01/2007 11:11:19 AM
This is pretty with nice composition. I think a little more light on the water lily would make this one even stronger - I feel like it's lacking punch even though it's a solid photo.
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10/01/2007 08:40:33 AM
A lovely subject, sensibly composed and with a well-chosen border. However this isn't going to score highly because the image is too dark and the subject not sharp enough. I'm spotting noise artefacts around the top of the petals as well.
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