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10/07/2007 02:16:25 PM |
| OK, I get the title. Not much here to critique. What's the dark smudge in the lower left corner. I would have cloned it out. The bright spot at the elbow is too burned out with no good reason. I think it would have been helped by cropping a lot off of the left side and maybe a little off of the top. I don't think that all of this blank space helps the overall composition. |
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10/05/2007 08:33:45 PM |
| Whoops..wrong challenge? Either way not a bad shot...the lighting could use some help. The back lighting is to harsh because the arm is washed out. The smudge in the bottom lefthand corner is a distraction also. |
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10/05/2007 12:08:22 PM |
| It took me a minute to realize the title is referring to the t-shirt. I like the mood in this photo, I only wished the bottom left corner wasnt discolored, otherwise, nice capture. |
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10/04/2007 08:01:04 PM |
| I like your image. Tthe white space, the composition, the lighting and the t-shirt graphic adds a point of interest too. |
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10/04/2007 08:45:41 AM |
| great idea! there are a few small things I don't like, the highlight on the eyebrow and at the elbow where it is blown out and the discolouration in the bottom LH side corner should not be there. Still very nice and refreshing. |
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10/01/2007 05:13:11 PM |
| The lighting is pretty good, but the lower left corner is grey. If this isn't on purpose you could have cloned out the vignetting. |
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10/01/2007 02:25:39 PM |
| the dark spot in the lower left is slightly distracting ... very intense gaze by the subject ... |
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10/01/2007 01:47:00 PM |
| lower left corner is distraction |
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10/01/2007 08:27:12 AM |
| A daring composition which doesn't quite work for me. Firstly, you need to lose that dark bit in the bottom left which is very easy to do under advanced editing. The crop is an awkward one - I would think if a little more of your subject was included it could work better. Overall I think the brightness of your background is interfering with your subject, the bit next to the arm is the most obvious example. |
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10/01/2007 08:03:34 AM |
| IMO, a bit more contrast is needed to make it sharper. |
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10/01/2007 06:14:24 AM |
| Very nice portrait and good backlighting. Maybe lacks a wow factor to do brilliantly in the challenge but I know that if this was a shot of me I would cherish it and want it hanging on my wall |
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10/01/2007 01:22:58 AM |
| Distracting blur in lower left corner. Shot looks like an outtake from the Half challenge. |
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10/01/2007 12:51:37 AM |
ok i'll be very very quiet. :)
yum |
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