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02/17/2004 07:06:45 PM |
| I understand what your shooting/or what she is doing, but this is just not of interest. There is so much going on. The texture of the basket, snow, deck, rails, purple gown, trees, feet......too much happening here to really focus the viewer and draw them into the shot. I hope this is helpful and not hurtful. Good luck in the challenge. |
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02/17/2004 08:06:44 AM |
| Your subject's pose lets me fill in the blanks. To make the shot better in my opinion, I'd like to see less of everything else. Cropping tighter on her, blurring the railing (as is it's fighting with her for my attention) The stuff in the basket is too small to let me know what you put in there but too busy to be a metaphor for stuff she's throwing away. |
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02/14/2004 09:47:58 AM |
| I can tell you are trying to say something with this picture, but I don't quite get the message. |
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02/13/2004 04:26:42 PM |
| Compositionally, this feels a bit lacking, but the idea is there and remains strong. :) I think it's that the background is a bit busy and the railing adds to that. Perhaps this setup against a clear sky? |
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02/12/2004 05:58:48 PM |
| Very interesting perspective and take to the challenge. Nice lighting and message well conveyed. |
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02/12/2004 02:25:17 PM |
| Sometimes I want to do the same. Good shoot. I like it very much. If you are interested, I had some issues the can enhance it a bit. The first idea of Letting Go of it All, is free yourself of those chains to your life cycle, not? Well, in this regard, the bars visions are strange. Other issue is about the exposure that has ovexposed parts in the grid and at CD on basket. Good Lucky. |
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02/12/2004 12:39:42 PM |
| Touching, childhood memories? Good interpretation. Does the background a bit distracting? |
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02/12/2004 02:08:43 AM |
| I don't understand what's going on in this photograph. |
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02/11/2004 01:26:45 PM |
| very good idea for this challenge, love the colors, is that an alarm clock I see in the basket? |
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02/11/2004 11:01:19 AM |
THe eye should be drawn to the subject of ths pic - the girl or the wastebasket. However, teh snow is getting my attention.
check the histogram of the original pic and see //www.luminous-landscape.com/tutorials/expose-right.shtml |
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02/11/2004 01:21:00 AM |
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