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01/24/2008 06:20:52 PM |
Very creative idea, i would have liked to see more smoke in this one, as well as a bit more contrast to give it better tones. Nice composition as well, neat shot. |
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10/23/2007 04:14:58 PM |
Love the b&w here, the image seems a bit soft. A bit of contrast would have helped, in my opinion. |
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10/20/2007 10:09:42 PM |
really great. concept, composition, use of b&w, lighting. more smoke. 9. |
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10/20/2007 12:11:04 PM |
I think the contrast is a little lacking.. |
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10/20/2007 11:25:43 AM |
poor BW conversion. just not a very good image overall. sorry. 4 |
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10/18/2007 02:13:49 PM |
Awesome idea...need some smoke. |
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10/18/2007 12:45:29 PM |
I would have liked to see stronger smoke signals |
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10/18/2007 12:36:02 AM |
I would have made the background a little darker black. Higher contrast would have added to the picture. |
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10/17/2007 10:41:38 PM |
Although the grays look a little flat, I like the smoke. It adds to the concept of the pencil being a cigarette. |
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10/17/2007 09:34:01 PM |
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10/17/2007 01:45:51 PM |
I think you could have portrayed this better, used a white pencil and showed more smoke coming out of the tray. It's a good idea. |
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10/17/2007 10:50:16 AM |
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10/17/2007 09:57:14 AM |
underexposed; adjust levels |
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