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10/16/2007 07:39:11 AM |
| Fantastic pose, beautiful eyes! |
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10/16/2007 07:34:52 AM |
| I always love this pose, the angle of it, as it forces you to look right into her eyes with everything else going out of focus with shallow DOF. IMO, you've done very well here. The only complaint would be the hose or whatever the green line is. But you can easily fix that in post, so no problem there. But I gotta say this: Wow! What beautiful eyes she has!!! |
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10/16/2007 07:24:36 AM |
Its a Fairly Nice Photograph and you are probably well pleased with your result.
The Girl Probably turned up with what she thought was nice and smart looking.
The Problem I have with it, whch is no fault of your own, but the Black Veil is totaly invisable against her very Black Hair and Her Face is a Bit bright against the dramatic Black.
If The Girl had A white Veil it would be completely different in my honest opinion.
Nice Photo Though ! |
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10/16/2007 05:31:58 AM |
| yep, the green stripe is very distracting. I'd also tint the brown areas in the grass with green. Besides that a great shot. |
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10/16/2007 02:39:17 AM |
| Nice focus on those eyes. |
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10/16/2007 02:29:17 AM |
| Hey nm... now that she's 18 ... :-) |
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10/16/2007 01:31:20 AM |
| No the veil is cool, just dont like how tight it is by her right eye, but thats very minor. agree with getting rid of the green stripe and there is a hint of blue on the bottom of the image against her right arm. Other than that, another great shot |
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10/16/2007 01:30:16 AM |
| I think this is just fantastic. It really carries an emotional overtone. I would not change a thing. |
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10/16/2007 01:22:57 AM |
i like the photo and all but i think the hairnet or vail thing is a little distracting. also take out taht neon green color by her arm
Message edited by author 2007-10-16 01:24:09. |
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10/15/2007 11:07:23 PM |
| This is really great. The colors, the comp, the clarity. She's a great model and well styled. |
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