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02/21/2004 09:53:04 AM |
**Critique Club**
Hi Ellamay!
400 shots...wow, you definately did have a very patient subject.
You followed the rule of thirds nicely. The black on black composition is great and the subtle lighting is just enough to seperate the subject from the background on the right. They eyes really grab your attention when you first look at this. You have a nice sharp focus, allowing good detail on the eyes.
Possible improvements:
I think maybe just a little light from the top or top-right would have helped define the top of the head of your subject better.
Overall a nice photo that is pleasing to look at.
-Chris
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02/20/2004 06:10:37 PM |
| Very moving portrait. fantastic work. 10 |
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02/18/2004 02:47:47 PM |
| Blue and browneyed? Nice. |
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02/18/2004 01:49:41 PM |
still the best today, good pic, black on black, great eyes,
well done |
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02/17/2004 08:10:52 PM |
| it looks as if the face was copied and pasted |
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02/17/2004 03:21:24 PM |
| Was the red eye intentional or accidental. Very interesting shot. |
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02/17/2004 01:51:44 PM |
| Great photo, hope you get a decent position with this |
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02/17/2004 08:44:14 AM |
| I like this. Great composition and highly provocative. |
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02/17/2004 07:59:23 AM |
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02/16/2004 06:17:35 PM |
| very dramatic effect with the lighting and subject matter. |
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02/16/2004 04:55:03 PM |
| Very nice! Like the concept and the lighting. |
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02/16/2004 03:34:51 PM |
| Neat. But the two colors of the eyes bothered me. It was the attention getter rather than the girl peering out of the darkness. |
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02/16/2004 01:17:32 PM |
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