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02/22/2004 07:57:15 PM |
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02/19/2004 10:19:13 PM |
I'll give you the challenge on the title and subject of the piece of sculpture that you are shooting. However, your colors are very dull (levels?) and you appear to be overexposed in her white dress and she appears to be tilted to the left. Also your focus is a little off.
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02/19/2004 07:21:24 AM |
| sorry but I didn't like you pic very much - the background drape is very distracting to me |
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02/18/2004 06:17:46 PM |
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02/17/2004 06:54:40 PM |
| Mmm, maybe an outdoor shot would make this much more interesting, but that´s just me... |
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02/17/2004 05:21:58 PM |
| I like the windy day effect shown by the statuette, but the background (wrinkles, not folds) detracts from the picture. |
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02/17/2004 02:08:46 AM |
there are a number of things that could be done to improve your picture.
lighting - the lighting is not very interesting and is casting in the same direction of the shot, which creates a flat looking image. i would try and experiment with different lighting directions.
background - the background could be improved by moving the figure further away from the cloth drop. there is nothing really wrong with the cloth, but if the figure was further from it there wouldn't be harsh black shadows casting on the cloth.
crop and perspective - i would suggest getting closer to your subject and trying to pick out what it is that interests you. once you find what it is, you can get closer on it and leave out all the other parts. also along with getting closer you could try different angles to shoot from that would create unusual views, which would in turn interest the viewer.
working on these things would improve any picture from looking like you are trying to sell something, to something more artistic. |
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