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02/24/2004 10:40:39 PM |
Nice idea and interesting shot. Nice texture. |
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02/24/2004 07:13:17 AM |
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02/23/2004 10:56:37 AM |
nicely exposed. quite nice ;) 8 |
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02/23/2004 04:14:44 AM |
Great idea here. The composition seems just a little too simple (though it is nice), and the out of focus pasta in the foreground seems to detract (maybe it would have been better to have the pasta in the back OOF). |
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02/22/2004 10:49:31 AM |
A little tighter crop at the top perhaps, but nice job. |
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02/22/2004 04:37:14 AM |
Sorry...I can't make out what this is supposed to be so I don't know what the texture should be like. |
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02/21/2004 05:43:10 AM |
Cute, nice use of depth of field, but I don't like the lighting much for some reason. It needs more mid-tones I think, or maybe the opposite, way more contrast. Also, you could have put another row or two of pasta in the rear... I can see through to the background. it's just a litle detail I'd obsess over if I were shooting this, maybe you wanted it that way. :) |
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02/20/2004 07:50:44 PM |
I'm back to comment. Creative use of pasta to show texture. The lighting is great.
Keep it up... |
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02/20/2004 01:49:46 PM |
Perhaps not enough regularity in this rhythmical composition to make it work - this kind of thing really needs to be almost absolutely regular to be effective, and this is broken up too much. Light is good, and detailing, though somehow not a reat deal of feel of texture comes through. |
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02/19/2004 03:58:36 PM |
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02/19/2004 10:24:36 AM |
yum...good use of light... |
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02/19/2004 12:17:31 AM |
Nice curves and lines. Trying to figure out what it is. Good lighting, but would like more DOF. |
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02/18/2004 07:16:11 PM |
Yummy! nice color and light work. |
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02/18/2004 05:53:22 AM |
Beautiful, very good expression of Italian Texture |
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