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11/27/2007 12:26:42 PM |
Hi Gree,
Interesting image, What I think happened here was the right side of the image accounted for your 2,3,4 scores and the left side got you the higher 5,6,7 scores. What caused this i believe are two things, First your bokeh took control over the entire image & secondly the bokeh had the effect of creating two separate images. The right side of the image seems slightly out of focus and a bit blown-out causing a lose of detail in the flower and water dropletts. On the left side however you have a nice clean, sharp image nice detail in the pedals & water dropletts. The leaf just in front of the flower is nice and soft and it\'s placement compliments the image. I would have either cropped or repositioned and used just the upper left side of the image only. This would have given you a nice line coming down the right side of the image and making that second leaf your bokeh. I took the liberty of trying it and turned out to be a really nice image that I would have scored a 7 or maybe 8. |
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11/20/2007 11:16:47 PM |
Great DOF! Superb Image! :) |
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11/18/2007 03:39:59 PM |
The big green leaf or stem in the middle is disturbing. The petal on the left is lovely. |
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11/17/2007 05:21:17 AM |
The foregrounds gets in the way here. Rather than adding to the composition, I feel it detracts. |
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11/14/2007 11:12:03 AM |
i feel the bokeh is the "subject" of this photo... rather than making the photo better... |
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