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03/07/2004 11:04:16 PM |
*Greetings From the Critique Club*
Congratulations on your highest rated shot! I must also add that you are a great addition to team DSC-P72. I also have this camera, also happen to be 18, and I also happen to live in the Northwest (Meridian, ID). I must say that I have enjoyed looking at your work and I think you have done a marvelous job thus far. ;)
Composition:
I LOVE the composition here, very unique and creative. The reflection is crystal clear and it works extremely well. As mentioned earlier by karmat, this is indeed a unique thing to see on a tea-pot. It adds a lot of flavor to something that is indeed...well...dull. Very nicely done. There is one thing however, though, that I feel could have made this shot a whole lot stronger than it is (and I also believe this was mentioned before) that the entire form of the tea-pot should be seen. Because without the title, I wouldn't have guessed it was a tea-pot, I also thought that it was rear view mirror of some sorts. That's all I would really do to fix the composition, because it alerady is a dynamic composition.
Focus and Clarity:,
Excellent DOF! I bleive this area is SPOT on! Nice work!
Other Thoughts:
Again, very nicely done! I commend your creativeness and look forward to seeing some of you future work. I think it would be really neat if you and I could dominate the highest rated shots in the DSC-P72 camera.
~Matthew Dykman (goinskiing)
If you have any comments, questions, or concerns, feel free to PM or contact me! Good Luck! |
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02/29/2004 11:36:04 PM |
That's an interesting reflection to have on a teapot! |
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02/28/2004 08:36:45 PM |
interesting to take it outside :) |
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02/28/2004 12:37:09 PM |
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02/28/2004 12:18:51 PM |
Nice concept and a great capture! I wish I could tell a little more that it actually is a teapot. My first reaction was that is a Side mirror for a motorcycle. Still a nice shot and great work. |
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02/28/2004 10:44:47 AM |
Interesting idea, nice shot. |
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02/26/2004 08:47:12 AM |
What's your teapot doing out in the parking lot? |
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02/26/2004 06:44:08 AM |
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02/25/2004 10:23:32 AM |
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02/24/2004 02:04:47 AM |
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02/23/2004 01:17:36 PM |
Not wholly convinced about this one. Certainly meets the challenge perfectly - but something in the composition, perhaps just that you've excluded so much of the actual form of the tea-pot, takes away from it - perhaps without the tilt it would be more immediately familiar, or perhaps with a slightly less narrow aspect ratio. Good balance of shapes and forms I think, but that one thing lets it down a touch. |
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