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if I were an electron...
if I were an electron...
wenyao


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Your Corner of the World (Classic Editing)
Camera: Canon PowerShot Pro 90 IS
Location: Pittsburgh
Date: Sep 22, 2002
Aperture: f/2.8
ISO: 50
Shutter: 1/10
Date Uploaded: Sep 22, 2002

 My trusty, 5 yrs old Aopen Ap5t motherboard

Statistics
Place: 216 out of 245
Avg (all users): 4.3465
Avg (commenters): 4.2000
Avg (participants): 4.2744
Avg (non-participants): 4.4317
Views since voting: 993
Votes: 303
Comments: 10
Favorites: 0

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 Comments Made During the Challenge
09/28/2002 09:02:00 PM
As an Intel Employee I gotta love this one! rcrawford
 09/27/2002 09:27:00 PM
Nice picture, but I think you took it a step too far by saying, "If I were..." whatever sort of thing. This is supposed to be about YOUR part of the world.
 09/27/2002 09:16:00 AM
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background7,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing7,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 4,
Total Averaged Rating6. Autool
 09/26/2002 09:03:00 PM
Initial=hmmm.
Composition=okay
Clarity (focus, details)=fairly good detail, but the choice of DOF hampers some of this
Exposure=I think this could use a bit more DOF
Interesting or Emotive=mildly interesting.

I am using a this new detailed commenting method inspired by autool. (Thanks
autool!). I hope you find it more helpful than my former comments.
Thanks for submitting, and good luck! ;0)
kpb
 09/25/2002 11:28:00 PM
...but you're not
 09/25/2002 07:53:00 AM
Look at your DOF. What area is in focus? Now tell me what is in that area that is interesting.

Nonetheless it is a clever take on the challenge.
 09/24/2002 11:37:00 PM
if you were an electron, you would submit a photo of an electrical charge, something that shows the actual activity instead of a boring motherboard which is out of focus on both ends and nothing really interesting to draw my eyes to.
 09/24/2002 12:23:00 AM
Lots of nice green. I like that... However, there's nothing here that really grabs me. 5 sjgleah
 09/23/2002 07:28:00 PM
Too narrowly focussed.
 09/23/2002 10:50:00 AM
Interesting photo... the tie-in to the challenge, IMO, is not as strong as it could be. I would love to see more evenly distributed lighting and focus on this image... - jmsetzler


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