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03/08/2004 06:03:57 PM |
| Greetings from the CC, I think what i find most lacking in your shot is some perspective, it is a bit too close up to really tell what it is. I think it is an interesting interpretation of topic but without title not sure I would of known what it is. Taking a few steps back may have really helped IMO. I also think that if you use an 'ordinary' subject i.e. car, that you need to do something to make it grab your attn. I would like to see more of the damage. Perhaps using the mirror as a point of interest to reflect more would of been nice too. Just some ideas hope it helps, keep shooting. |
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03/02/2004 05:49:09 PM |
| This is a littel busy... I can't tell what you want me to focus upon. I'd have no idea this was a car without the title. Good clear black & white, though... |
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02/29/2004 06:52:34 AM |
| too close. should have shown a little more of the whole car. |
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02/28/2004 02:32:51 PM |
| Too hard to make out a car- it just comes across as garbage to me. Pull back a little or show a steering wheel and you've got it. |
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02/28/2004 12:01:38 PM |
| I hate this kind of conflicts... Anyway, great shot and very good use of B&W. congratulations. |
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02/27/2004 05:06:03 PM |
| Interesting choice of the close up. It's almost hard to recognize what it is when it's not in the state we're used to. I think that gives it powerful effect. I like the choice of black and white as well. 7 |
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02/26/2004 07:59:22 PM |
| good idea and nice range of tones. the composition is a little busy - makes it hard to distinguish what is happening |
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02/26/2004 01:16:47 PM |
| Why did you put a border around this image? Plus there is no focus subject in the image and the contrast is to flat. |
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02/25/2004 08:51:12 PM |
| Without the title, some people wouldn't be able to tell this is the front end of a car..? Maybe a glimpse of the road would have helped, or possibly another car. |
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02/25/2004 08:45:12 PM |
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